This is Alice Kim's Web-Based Writer's Portfolio. It was posted and designed by Anthony Hsu (Erwaman). This is the evaluation and suggestions section.

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Evaluation and Suggestions

     In general, I had no trouble with this year’s Language Arts curriculum. It was both fun and challenging with all the writing requirements. The only thing I disliked was the one requirement that cut down to four linking verbs. That was a very difficult revision for me, and if u recall, this requirement came up several times over the marking periods.

     I have a couple of suggestions to make next year’s curriculum a little better. I feel you shouldn’t assign all 13 poems. Even though I love writing poems, writing 13 was a bit too much. It got a little tiring after a while, especially since it was based on the same topic: family. Maybe if you could diversify the poem subjects it would be easier and more fun to do.

     Another request for next year is that you shouldn’t assign similar revision requirements. To me, writing an epilogue or changing the verb seemed a little repetitive, and I soon got bored of writing the same thing over and over. Aside from that, Language Arts this year was very entertaining, and I hope my suggestions will make next year even better.

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